Poetry? Oh noetry!

[sylvar]

My friend Jenn got a poem published!

And no, Toothpaste For Dinner fans, it's not at all bad poetry. It's a lot of fun, although some scoundrel added a comma to the first line.

Comments

[gardenwaltz.livejournal.com]

thanks :) sadly, i must admit to the comma in the original. no, it shouldn't be there. i think it's a vestige from the original draft when i changed it to the 'first letter capitalized' style. in the print version it's centered, which is not something i would have done, but this poem is too light to worry about such trivialities.