Comments on a short résumé, please

[sylvar]

Following Guy Kawasaki's advice (at the suggestion of a potential employer), I've produced a one-page résumé.

I am, as always, very grateful for any comments.

http://www.vaxer.net/~sylvar/resume/short-resume.pdf
http://www.vaxer.net/~sylvar/resume/short-resume.doc

Comments

[karenkay.livejournal.com]

Wow! I think this is fabulous. Very hard to distill all of that. Good job.

[sylvar.livejournal.com]

Thank you!