sylvar (
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2008
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10:52 am
Current Mood:
foul-ish
A sad haiku
A roll of quarters
once meant fun at the arcade,
not feeding meters.
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karenkay.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 04:36 pm (UTC)
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now feeding meters
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sylvar.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 04:50 pm (UTC)
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I meant "not", for contrast. "Now" is implied by "once".
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hitchkitty.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 05:02 pm (UTC)
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Wonder which is worse
Having to feed the meter
Or washing machine
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sylvar.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 05:32 pm (UTC)
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Ah, we've got a stacked set of full-size HE washer and dryer at home. It's lovely.
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gardenwaltz.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 05:39 pm (UTC)
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wonderful image!
i told you writing haikus
would be addictive.
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sylvar.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 06:07 pm (UTC)
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Yeah, I only had trouble deciding how many syllables are in "hours".
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juniperpearls.livejournal.com
2008-02-28 01:20 am (UTC)
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I'm 99% sure it's a dipthong and one syllable.
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sylvar.livejournal.com
2008-02-28 03:35 am (UTC)
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I think it can be either, and in some dialects it's monophthongal fronted /a/. :)
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sylvar.livejournal.com
2008-02-27 06:10 pm (UTC)
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...so I rewrote without it.
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ximinez
2008-02-27 06:48 pm (UTC)
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Do you need to feed the meter, are are you happy to see me?
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srmm.livejournal.com
2008-02-28 06:49 am (UTC)
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http://lunacityarcade.com/
I just want to point you there.
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Having to feed the meter
Or washing machine
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i told you writing haikus
would be addictive.
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I just want to point you there.