Obama for America: Ur doin it rong.
Aug. 19th, 2008 03:37 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sylvarObama's campaign usually gets it right, but this is just bad. It would be better as its own blog. The joy of Google Reader is the serendipity of letting other people read blogs I don't, and trusting them to share just what they think is cool or important. The Obama for America Google Reader shared items feed makes a mockery of this personal connection.
If anyone from the campaign reads this: guys, pick a few staffers to scour the media for articles that help you make your point about why we need Obama's policies, and KEEP IT PERSONAL! Nobody wants a stentorian advisory that further information on the subject is available elsewhere. Inject an on-message bullet point with some genuine personality and move on to the next item.
For example, when linking to the story about the 2,000,000th campaign donor, your comment on it was: "Listen to Barack Obama's phone call to the 2 millionth donor at http://my.barackobama.com/twomillionth".
How about: "Turns out it was a small-business owner who said business is terrible. I guess he considered his donation a strategic investment in the American economy."
If anyone from the campaign reads this: guys, pick a few staffers to scour the media for articles that help you make your point about why we need Obama's policies, and KEEP IT PERSONAL! Nobody wants a stentorian advisory that further information on the subject is available elsewhere. Inject an on-message bullet point with some genuine personality and move on to the next item.
For example, when linking to the story about the 2,000,000th campaign donor, your comment on it was: "Listen to Barack Obama's phone call to the 2 millionth donor at http://my.barackobama.com/twomillionth".
How about: "Turns out it was a small-business owner who said business is terrible. I guess he considered his donation a strategic investment in the American economy."
